I realy liked the movie "Rear window" because it is original and I like watching my neighbours too! ^^ ! I was fond of this film because it is very funny.
Your review's english was pretty good, but there were a couple of mistakes. "realy" is actually spelled "really". I would seperate the first sentence into two sentences and combine the first sentence with the last one sicne they are both about what you liked about the movie. "I really liked the movie "Rear Window" because it is origional and very funny. I liked it because I could relate to the story, since I like to watch my neighbiors as well!" Good job! I'm glad you enjoyed the film! -Max Perrey
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Your review's english was pretty good, but there were a couple of mistakes.
"realy" is actually spelled "really". I would seperate the first sentence into two sentences and combine the first sentence with the last one sicne they are both about what you liked about the movie. "I really liked the movie "Rear Window" because it is origional and very funny. I liked it because I could relate to the story, since I like to watch my neighbiors as well!"
Good job! I'm glad you enjoyed the film!
-Max Perrey
sorry, "neighbiors" is actually spelled neighbors.
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